The 'fake' poem sounds a bit like an insult you might hurl in a catfight.
Tunnel is okay, although some of the words look a bit out of place.
The best poems are ones where the person actually feels what they are writing about, and yours seem like you're just writing things you think sound poetic.
The 'fake' poem sounds a bit like an insult you might hurl in a catfight.
Tunnel is okay, although some of the words look a bit out of place.
The best poems are ones where the person actually feels what they are writing about, and yours seem like you're just writing things you think sound poetic.
So connect