How is my poem? What should I add or change about it?
it is supposed to be a color poem, where you pick a color that relates to you and write about it. it is due tomorrow and we will have jazz music that we have selected playing in the background, so what do you guys think so far? should i add or take out somet things?
Turquoise
is the a mixture of two different colors,
one of the ever-changing sky and the purity of a river
another of the growth and freshness of nature
A simple yet elegant feature to add.
At the peak of yellow it will jump into place
with rest of the world,
but as soon as the sun sets it will lie into its postition
and be independently free.
it is pretty short but i really like it 
its simple and beautiful, but i would also love for you to post your comments on it thanks
its really good! very detailedd!
Whimsical Jazz – Royalty Free Background Music
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